Technique
To make your paragraph convincing is the matter of presenting main ideas in each body paragraph. You have known that each body paragraph needs to have good internal organization – it must have topic sentence, supporting sentences, and optional concluding sentence.RULES: You must make…
- Each topic sentence supports the thesis statement.
- Supporting sentences support each topic sentence.
Introductory paragraph | Lead: | ||
Link: | |||
List: | Specific topic + | Main point 1 Main point 2 Main point 3 |
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Body paragraph 1 |
TS = | Main point 1 + | Controlling idea |
SS = |
Supporting 1A + | Supporting details 1A | |
Supporting 1B + | Supporting details 1B | ||
Supporting 1C + | Supporting details 1C | ||
Body paragraph 2 |
TS = | Main point 2 + | Controlling idea |
SS = |
Supporting 2A + | Supporting details 2A | |
Supporting 2B + | Supporting details 2B | ||
Supporting 2C + | Supporting details 2C | ||
Body paragraph 3 |
TS = | Main point 3 + | Controlling idea |
SS = |
Supporting 3A + | Supporting details 3A | |
Supporting 3B + | Supporting details 3B | ||
Supporting 3C + | Supporting details 3C |
The topic sentence (of the body paragraphs)
Each topic sentence directly supports the thesis statement. You must use the main point/sub-topic as the topic and add your controlling idea, i.e.Introductory Paragraph
- Thesis statement = specific topic + {main point 1 + main point 2, main point 3}
- Topic Sentence 1 = Main point 1+ Controlling Idea
- Topic Sentence 2 = Main point 2+ Controlling Idea
- Topic Sentence 3 = Main point 3+ Controlling Idea
- Thesis statement: Pollution, waste, and climate change are threatening freshwater supplies.
- Topic sentence 1: Freshwater is being polluted by dirty water from several sources.
- Topic sentence 2: People are wasting fresh water.
- Topic sentence 3: Changes in global weather patterns have affected supplies of fresh water.
- Thesis statement: The main factors causing most road accidents are seen to be people, vehicle, and roads.
- Topic sentence 1: People abuse the traffic laws.
- Topic sentence 2: The vehicles are not properly checked or have technical defects.
- Topic sentence 3: The roads also cause the accidents.
The supporting sentences (of the body paragraphs) –
The supporting sentences, which include supporting ideas and details, support each topic sentence. Follow the rules for writing paragraph (See the illustration below).Write a Topic Sentence | → | Create a Topic Question | → | Answer the Topic Question |
Use the main point in the thesis statement | Convert the topic sentence to topic question. | 1st level answers are supporting ideas; 2nd level answers are supporting details. |
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