Words or groups of words linked together with a coordinating or correlative conjunction are often doing the same job and need to be parallel; for examples,
[1] Noun + noun
• I like volleyball, soccer, and to play basketball. (Not parallel)→ I like volleyball, soccer, and basketball. (Parallel)
(or I like to play volleyball, soccer, and basketball.) (Parallel)
[2] Noun phrase + noun phrase
• I am allergic to the dog’s hair and how it smells. (Not parallel)→ I am allergic to the dog’s hair and its smells. (Parallel)
[3] Noun clause + noun clause
• What counts isn't how you look (noun clause) but your behavior (noun phrase). (Not parallel)→ What counts isn't how you look but how you behave. (Parallel)
[4] Verb + verb
• He doesn't have enough time to play sports, doing social work, and socializing with friends. → He doesn't have enough time to play sports, does social work, and socialize with friends.
[5] Adjective + adjective
• She is smart, beautiful, and care. (Not parallel)→ She is smart, beautiful, and caring. (Parallel)
[6] Adverb + adverb
• He made decision slowly and with caution. (Not parallel)→ He made decision slowly and cautiously. (Parallel)
[7] Gerund + gerund
• Mary likes hiking, swimming, and to ride a bicycle. (Not parallel)→ Mary likes hiking, swimming, and riding a bicycle. (Parallel)
[8] Infinitive + infinitive
• He intended to read the book , do homework, and research. (Not parallel)→ He intended to read the book, to do homework, and to conduct research. (Parallel)
[9] Prepositional phrase + prepositional phrase
• He looked for the keys in the car, under the bed, and his bag. (Not parallel)→ He looked for the keys in the car, under the bed, and in his bag. (Parallel)
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